Hi,
Thanks. Its good to hear that some parts of it are actually not that bad 
BTW I changed the name of the piece and reuploaded it:
https://soundcloud.com/sirgoddemit/alleyway-gloom
in case some1 can’t find it in the address above.
Hi,
Great sounds! I love how the percussion and bass sounds blend together in the first section. I also like how the melodic lead sound seems back the mix but can still be heard clearly. Nice!